Alone I walk thru the darkness.
Wrapped in the arms of night.
Searching for forbidden kisses.
That will take me away from the light.
I feel the pain wash round me.
I call out, and beg for release.
He comes from the darkness to sooth me.
I know that in death I’ll find peace.
His hands are like magic upon me.
He pull’s me into his embrace.
I beg for the moment of pleasure,
That will signal my fall from grace.
He covers me there in the darkness
This being who can’t stand the day
He drains me with nary a whisper.
I feel my life slipping away.
Drink deeply I plead in the darkness.
Drink deeply, till agony wanes.
Drink deeply till nothing is left here.
Till blood… washes away all my pain.
But, fate and he are cruel masters.
To leave me alone with my life.
Left to face forever in darkness.
Pain; I couldn’t bear in the light.
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Written April 25th, 2001
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Excellent
This gave me the chills but it was an amazing write...almost a love story but not quite. Excellent
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Wow.........wonderful write.......How depthful.
But fate and he are cruel masters.
To leave me alone with my life.
Left to face forever in the darkness.
Pain; I couldn't bear in the light.
I can relate to this stanza all to well. You put this together with such simplicity but you have been able to capture such an enormous depth......I really like this one....The hand of death that extends a worse one that you can't imagine......life. Awesome writing........thanks........lisa anne -
Ohhhh
I love Vampire writes
I have up a few myself and lost the pics dang it
This is indeed dark and somewhat has the Ghotic feel to it
Loved it
Do come and visit me and my poems wont ya
Blessings
Susan~~~~~~ -
brilliant
Oh my gosh! This is amazing! It's so morbib..yet touching! I love the part of the darkness wrapping around you...great imagery! Rock on! I LOVE THIS!
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