It is so cold outside of your love
Kiss my heart
Touch my soul
Love me again
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Written August 14th, 2006
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ooo! beautiful
0.0 wow!! what a perfect way to say that! some peoples would have gone all verbose, but you said exactly what you wanted to, simply and perfectly.
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So peacefully beautiful, yet sad, simply spoken yet filled with deeper meanings, deeper husts and higher cares. awesome read, loved it
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beautiful
Wow, so short, yet it has all it ever needs. Beautiful work! the picture goes perfectly with it!
Very good writing indeed, keep up the good work!
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I agree with everyone else. You were able to convey a lot in a few words. I wonder what your body language is like...smile!
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A lovely piece and very nicely done
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wow
short and sweet and so to the point.
says volumes.
a beautiful write you have here.
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good
You know.... these short writes always speak volumes and leave me wanting more.... I am way toooo inquisitive, it just shoots my mind off to create a story of my own until I finally hear the real one...Ha! Well, this too from Aug... Hope you are getting your mojo back and we will see some more of your fabulous work soon... get that pen scrolling missy! Thanks for sharing and as always... a pleasure to read your work
~Tia
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This poem expresses so much in so few lines. Simply written but very emotionally charged. Well done dear poet.
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I can relate to this like it was written by myself. I never did like it when one says, let's just be friends.
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Excellent
You are very alive in your words. Your style and heart matches my own. Now I know how and whyn you felt my words so deeply, Rick
So good, I wish there had been more words -
really good but perhaps change the word cold to something else that's ur orginal metaphor true in few words.
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sad how life deals bitter hands in life
such emotion your words touched my heart
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Incredible that something so short can be so powerful. This is superb! I am blown away by your gift.
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very good
what a wonderful poem. So clearly expressed. I like the way u play sense with your words. Keep this up.
Good day. If u dont mind, i would like to add u on my favourite. -
Oh I know how that feels... missing the one you love. short but beautiful write, and cold is exactly how it felt away from him. Nice job. J.
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this poem
said so very much
with so few words
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I loved this piece, so elequent and even in its brevity conveys a multitude of emotion. great write. keep your pen forever flowing!
Bunny
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Kiss my heart
Touch my soul
Love me again
such a wonderful request. and it does seem cold w/o someone loving you. this is a very heartfelt piece, loved it. ly, Duckie.
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It is so cold outside of your love
Kiss my heart
Touch my soul
Love me again
A great request..great appeal...a great beauty...and off course a great poem as well...
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wow. awesome. the shortness made it so perfect, it's such a magnificient poem. thanks. mary beth
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Wow great piece i loved it.
It was short but true (i think.
Well i liked it anyway.
Keep writing and take care
God Bless you
Stuner
I hope that you have the Lord in your heart and Jesus Christ as your savior.
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The perfect kind of poetry that you could ever write about LOVE .... but the cool thing is is that you didn't really candy coat it with many different emotions that you feel when you're with this person and it makes it very easy to Love/relate to this poem in a way that reaches for your hand but touches your heart kinda way.... Keep up the great work!!!!
A+....lol--- You can tell I'm back in school!!!
Sirena -
Thank you Earl...You are spoiling me...
Soulful Woman
Noreen -
oh, my......oh my...what can i say that has not been said or what is not already known by you? You and I, we know all the rest of the story my friend!
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This is magnificent. You tell a life story in three small exquisite lines!! I really like short poems. They seem to have so much punch. This one certainly does. Warm Regards...vivela
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very short but very emotional!! wonderful write..please continue!
eliza -
loved it
i like your poem, you let the person know how you were feeling with out pressuring them with so many feelings -
SHORT & SWEET!
SHORT & SWEET and right to the heart of the matter! Thanks SO MUCH for featuring this very soulful piece for i had one applause left for the day that I didn't know what to do with until now! This one gets A STANDING O from me!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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