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Senses of You

Little princess dancing 'round
Your laughter is my favorite sound
That light that makes your eyes shine bright
Is by far my favorite sight
Your silken skin with powdered hint
Has always been my favorite scent
Sweet kisses on your little face
has now become my favorite taste
Your hand in mine, your hugs and such
Will always be my favorite touch.

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Written August 14th, 2006
This obviously for a little girl so it may not apply for you, but it is one one my favorites that I wrote for my daughter.

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  • Dryad Enya
    September 19

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    It may not apply to me yet, or never at all if it's a boy but i still think this is adorable!!!!

    I love the rythmning scheme and the contrast between it all. My only thing against it is:
    'Your silken skin with powdered hint
    Has always been my favorite scent'

    are those supposed to rhythm because the rest of it does and i dont think that does??

    No matter i still love it!
    Best of luck and thanks!
    Dryad Enya


  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    September 18
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    its so adorable!


  • LittleLeopardess
    April 16, 2007

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    This is sooo sweet!! It makes me think of a little child and really makes me want to have my own kid! (of course not for years yet! but still!).


  • Red Pen
    August 14, 2006
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    Awww.