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Breathe

in

out

in

out

there's a rhythm to
the movement of diaphragm,
every rise and fall

in
out
in
out

the expansion of
aveoli, lung and the
absorption of air

in out
in out

there's a rhythm to
adapting when it's not quite
right; to forgetting

inoutinout

Author notes

::shrug::
Written August 14th, 2006

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  • nini b
    August 15, 2006
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    Thank you. :-)

  • nini b
    August 15, 2006
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    I've always got breathing issues, so this was more about the problems becoming so everyday that they are no longer problems, but just the way it is. ::shrug::


  • RainySoul22
    August 14, 2006
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    Having breathing issues again?
    I hope not
    This is different but I like how it seems to speed up.
    Hope you're ok.
    Toodles


  • the blonde poet
    August 14, 2006
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    hmmm this is the first i heard a poem about breathing like that your unique keep it up