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Charlie and the Choclate Factory the new one

I like a movie with Johnny Depp
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, the same name wasn't kept
In this movie he was weird
Facing his dad again is what he feared
Until he met him in the end
Making Charlie Bucket as a new friend

In this movie, this kid was fat
He won the first ticket and he thought he was all that
His name was Agustus Gloop
The Oompa Loompas called him a "Big Ninkapoop"
That they sang in their song
their songs were two or three minutes long
The Oompa Loompas weren't very tall
The actor who played them all was infact small

Now heres a question, do you like gum?
Do you think it's yck or do you think it's yum?
In his factory he whipped a cow
And all i got to say to that is OWWW!!!!

He made Wonka Vision
Narrowing it down to one kid was his true mission
And then you see
Mike T.V.
on the screen
Lets hope he stays that small because he was mean

OK now in this part
Had to do with a girl named Violet Boegart
She had Willy Wonka's three course gum
That filled her up in her tum
Then she turned the color blue
She didn't know what was happeneing and her mom didn't know what to do
So the Oompa Loompas took her to the squeezing room
And her mother, thought she was doomed

Now Veruka was a spoiled child
A bad nut is what she filed
Because of her dad
That always wanted to make her glad not mad
Then they both went down the garbage pit
and her dad almost did not fit

Ok now this person was poor
He wanted the golden ticket maybe a hundred times more
More than anyone can imagine
He was happy when he got the win
Because there were only five in the world
You know if you won if your ticket was gold
He in the end wins a prize
Living in the Chocolate Factory with its big size

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Written August 14th, 2006

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  • star wars fanatic
    April 19, 2007

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    cute

    Nice description of the movie. The flow was a little awkward, but I just took it slow and really enjoyed it. *finalist*


  • dream5111
    April 14, 2007
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    "Ok now this person was poor
    He wanted the golden ticket maybe a hundred times more
    More than anyone can imagine
    He was happy when he got the win
    Because there were only five in the world
    You know if you won if your ticket was gold
    He in the end wins a prize
    Living in the Chocolate Factory with its big size" is my favorite part good luck


  • Flying-Flamingo13
    August 14, 2006
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    Great job on this!!! I also loved this movie!!! LOL, I love the oompa loompa dances!!! Thanks for entering!!! Good luck in the contest!!!

    ~HaLeY~