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Missin' (a song)

Okay, before you get confused, italics are the chorus and if you see italics AND bold, the music is more upbeat and stuff. if it's ONLY italics, it's a quiet chorus....

Step aside, move along
Don’t need you hangin’ on
Got no time to see you now
Time for me to head on out
To head on out

Don’t try to earn me back
There’re some things that you seem to lack
Things that you will need to have
Till then don’t try to earn me back
To earn me back

You’re missing some guts, missin’ some love
Missin’ some good old happy stuff
Missin’ some flavor, and maybe some spice
Get some and maybe I won’t wave “good-bye”


Get outta my way, I’m leaving you
Stop tryin to win, you won’t come through
Don’t need no flowers or candy hearts
It’s about time our pathways part
Our pathways part

‘cause you’re missing some guts, missin’ some love
Missin’ some good old happy stuff
Missin’ some flavor, and maybe some spice
Get some and maybe I won’t wave “good-bye”
You’re missin’ some jokes, missin’ a smile
Missin’ some happiness by a fire
Maybe some other girl lookin pretty and nice
Might say “come right by, I won’t say Good-bye”


(guitar solo, if any)

You’re missing some guts, missin’ some love
Missin’ some good old happy stuff
Missin’ some flavor, and maybe some spice
Get some and maybe I won’t wave “good-bye”


‘cause you’re missing some guts, missin’ some love
Missin’ some good old happy stuff
Missin’ some flavor, and maybe some spice
Get some and maybe I won’t wave “good-bye”
You’re missin’ some jokes, missin’ a smile
Missin’ some happiness by a fire
Maybe some other girl lookin pretty and nice
Might say “come right by, I won’t say Good-bye"


Step aside, move along
Don’t need you hangin’ on
Got no time to see you now
Time for me to head on out

Author notes

um, yeah, if you read my other lovey-dovey poem, then you know i have no experience in love, so, you can praise my talent for knowing love without actually knowing it..... or send me chocolate!
Written August 14th, 2006

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  • Poetry and I Inc
    January 26, 2007

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    Whoa,this person is in bad shape, huh? Missing too much stuff! I like the simplistic word pattern; repetition and flow bring the message out and has a clear understanding! Well, for someone who doesn't know much regarding "love", I'd say you've done a good job impersonating the reaction of most of us women once we get over a man.


  • ScratchedAt
    August 14, 2006
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    Well well well, me-ow. Welcome back, it's been a while.