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Transformation theroy

The stratus clouds show rain and the humid season is done
That tree in the field is bright in the summer sun
But slowly subsides down the spectrum
Passing through all the colours of the season
The same colours in emotion and reason

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This poem is about the change from summer to autumn. The weather is one thing that changes, but our personality's do the same.
Written August 14th, 2006

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 14, 2006
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    Oh definately agree with your notes about our personality changing. I know I'm like Jekyll and Hyde with the change of seasons!!!I really liked the way you expressed that in your poem...those last 2 lines especially.....Passing through all the colours of the season.....The same colours in emotion and reason." Lovely imagery. Thank you for entering and goos luck. Gaylene