Dancing beneath a glitter-kissed sky,
hand in hand on moon beam's light.
Caressing bodies, soft to touch,
in passions of most pleasing lust.
Hands glide ceraceous skin,
fluttering patterns cause shivers.
Lip to lip, hip to hip,
colliding like stars of the night.
Flesh to warm flesh,
sultry and sensuous.
Quivers of desire,
surrounded by a light show...
A million flecks rain down upon us.
In ecstasy, the cosmos
christens our love
with nature's fireworks.
The Gods release their roar,
as the ground rolls.
We reach the crest;
the culmination of an all out,
earth shattering orgasm.
Witnessed only by the Celestial night
and Luna's soft eyes.
Author notes
S
Written August 14th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Write Me Sexy and Sultry 2 (invite only) by Heavenly Angel.
325 points, ended August 27, 2006, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Mmm,me too. Thanks for the comments hun, much appreciated.
Storm -
The Night Rules!!!!
Damn, that was a great write!!!!!! This is an Earth shattering piece in my opinion well done!!!!!!!!!!! ( Especially because I love poems about nighttime and the night sky
!!! )
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Thank you, thank you. Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
Thank you Vickie. I appreciate your comments always hun.
Storm -
This is beautifully done, heart to heart, soul to soul. It has the soft touch and the heated passsion. Bravo! Blessings, Gypsy
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Autumn, another sensual flame flies from your fingertips. Beautiful poem. The background just goes perfectly with it. I absolutely love the lines in this piece. In ecstasy, the cosmos christens our love with nature's fireworks. That leaves such imagery. Good luck.
Vickie -
That positive energy comes from nature, the heavens. Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
I like that your write is so full of positive energy. You write in celebration of a wonderful shared encounter. Your write is exciting, vivid in presentation and alive with movement. Beautiful background too! Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks hun, appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
Thanks Sandy, glad you enjoyed and it turned out ok. Appreciate your comments. Got me laughing over here. Now I want to go write a wild one
Storm -
great
Great write Storm, you have done this with class, it is a most enjoyable read, and takes the reader along for the ride. -
Oooh girl, I KNEW I could count on you to write something that is just AWESOME! Whew!
You wrote this passionately yet very tastefully done and that makes for one heckuva writer, girl!
If this is mildly sensual then girl, your wild ones must be out of this world!
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of my contest; it's a wonderful addition -
Thank you Curt. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Way to go Storm, hot, but not too. The images used in this piece are magical, and so beautiful. The stanza "In ecstasy, the cosmos christens our love with nature's fireworks." is really, especially delightful. What a wonderful use of words to paint a magical picture, way to go, and best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you for the comment, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you, appreciate the comment.
Storm -
sensualy erotic very tastefully done
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YES I AGREE THIS WAS AVERY TASTEFUL AND PRETTY POEM.PLUS I LOVE THIS BACKGROUND
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Beautiful and tasteful.Well done, Ros
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