The chains tear and rip the skin,
Your pain only illuminates your sin.
I'm here to punish you for your guilt,
So take in awe of the tools I've built.
Close not your eyes of heartless fear,
You feed my longing as your eyes tear.
Such frightful thoughts filling your head.
Don't worry, it'll take a week before your dead.
First I'll starve your body of all desired.
Cleanliness, hunger and thirst required,
I'll break your spirit by destroying the flesh,
Then cut softly as your tongue lays at rest.
I'll start with the tendons, no escape.
Your limp wrists and ankles will drape,
Like curtains of forgotten muscle and bone.
Though worthless the wounds will be sewn.
No need to bleed you dry yet,
bones so unharmed and perfectly set.
To remedy such trifles will bring a grin,
As I take this steel rod to your shin.
The bone it breaks and flakes within.
Tearing muscle as jagged shards deepen,
Cry not my child for I know it hurts so,
But to cleanse the soul costs a painful toll.
Alas the time has come to relieve senses,
Removal of your aware sensual defenses.
Tongue, eyes, and ear drums. Destroyed.
No need for such luxuries employed.
Now to sew the the lids and lips,
Motionless is your face within a few snips.
O' don't give up yet, you've such pride,
But such boasting will only decay inside.
At last it's time, to finish your rights,
You'll know true pain in exactly two nights.
Till then sit tight and take in your thoughts.
As they clash about each other finding your faults.
Ah, here we are, the day has come,
Lets start with the removal of the thumb,
It hurts does it not? The pain will soon ease.
As your organs shut down slowly at tease.
A precision cut below the chest,
And a tray for you intestines to rest.
To slowly drain of fluid as I take your liver.
You'll endure this feat, you clueless sinner.
A few more movements of blade,
Here the useless organs are laid.
A heart, lungs, and brain are all you need,
A few more hours until you quit to bleed.
Finally I start to kill,
I remove the first lung with surgeons skill,
Then the next, your suffocating.
By now all diminish of hope is fading.
You gurgle your own blood,
Searching for air like you should,
Until the second is gone,
Here it lays beside your thumb.
My work here is done,
As I leave you here to burn in sun,
A natural roast of sinful meat,
Such divinity my pets will eat.
Author notes
A week with a psycho anyone?
Favorite band = Hammerfall.
Written August 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Black is my heart by Wulfareika.
300 points, ended October 3, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark, Demented, why not!?!! by wanderingstarlet.
432 points, ended April 17, 2007, 28 entries
Gold trophy winner
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370 points, ended June 24, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sick and Twisted 3 by Acidanthra.
700 points, ended August 17, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
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What did you think
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very sick and graphic, a tasty horror unfolding, detailed right down to last breath, and left to cook, excellent visuals, would make a good tale for a thriller in a book. enjoyed the read.
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This is some twisted imagery. I love it! I have had daydreams of doing these sort of torturous acts, and you have penned them down well. Congrats on the gold in your previous contest. It was well earned.
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I'd love a week with a psycho!!! =D
Enter the minds of the mentaly insane...
I love it, so to speek, I really do...
All of it, signifies such carnal hatred for the sins of others, though... this itself is a sin.
It has beautiful, heart wrenching, detail.
Just like I wanted.
Thankyou very very very much for entering my contest...
This is a masterpeice of brutality...
The mind of a true sadist!
~Raven
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damn! i really like it because it was twisted like i wanted. i love the visual image... kudos. thx for entering
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I really really like this, it's so dark and graphic! However, you didn't follow the rules
If you don't read the rules and change it then I'm going to have to disqualify you sorry, and I don't want to do that cause i really like this!
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awesome
this poem is awesome.... i loved reading it aloud... i don't kow why i love it so much it's so dark and sadistic... and oh so graphic... but i love it... and maybe that's why... great one, i'm looking forward to another
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