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AP Brother I Shall Be!

So an AllPoetry brother is what you want
So I guess I’ll go about this very nonchalant
The reason that I’m writing a poem for your contest
Is to possibly become your AP brother, do you detest?

Alright so let’s start off with some things to know about me
I love God and Dodge Vipers and my name starts with a T
The thing I value most, I’m sure it’s something you could guess
It is my love for God and my love for others; that is it, more or less

I’m a fairly simple guy, as you will surely find out
I don’t smoke or drink and I don’t curse or shout
I’ve got a paying job at a pizza place
I’ve never participated in a bicycle race

If I become your brother, I’ll protect you from other guys
I’ll beat them up if they hurt you or tell you any lies
I’ll love you and be there for you like any brother should
So pick me, or else you’ll have to deal with my bros in the hood

Naw, just kidding.


by Sharcu (Tim)

Author notes

Pretty much everything the contest calls for. Dodge Viper is my favorite car... I've loved it since I was first introduced to it when I was like 7  A couple random things in here, some funny, some stupid, some serious. Thanks for reading!
Written August 13th, 2006

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  • Frogzter gold member
    February 14, 2007

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    Oh I really enjoyed this one Tim! So spiritual in thought and emotion with good glow and rhythm. I also like your comments afterward! A dodge viper.... heck yea! I good deal with that! I'd settle for a Jaguar myself... lol or the new Saturn sky... lol This is great reading my friend! Blessings and best wishes,
    Hoodwinked again!
    Frogz~


  • richiesnana
    August 16, 2006
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    You are so awesome, your love for God speaks through your beautiful poems, I really love reading them, someday I hope to write like that I hope to get to know you, I really love your work, ok I said that didn’t I
    May God always bless you

    Kisses: Sue


  • Abscessed
    August 15, 2006
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    Haha your rhymes are really wacky
    Good luck in becoming his brother, I suspect a winner here


  • Tabitha-Robin
    August 14, 2006
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    This has such depth and meaning in it. I love the message you have placed here. This is wonderful. I hope to read more of your work. I hope you win the contest. Good luck my friend.

    Tabitha

  • lillmissunshine
    August 14, 2006
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    hey tim this is such an awesome poem It is really cute!!! I never knew you were from the hood Great job with this poem and good luck with this contest.


  • runandhide
    August 13, 2006
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    Lol!!! yeah, you have my stamp of approval (which is one of the requisites to win this one...).
    Although i doubt how much good you'd be at protecting...considering its like a 14 hour at least flight... Good luck with that one.
    What on earth is a Dodge Viper??? And just coz you dont smoke drink etc dosent by a long shot make you simple. Simple would be the last word that comes to mind when thinking of you.
    By the way, great background, i just noticed it was looking at me...
    I think this is one of the longest comments ive ever written that dosent include quotes (as in i like this bit:...)
    Luv ya.
    Rah


  • Molassis
    August 13, 2006
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    Tim... you are an excellent brother to me and I KNOW you'd be an excellent brother for the person this is written for as well... you are such an adorable young man!!!

    You make me SO proud!!!!!

    ~Melissa

  • Frogzter gold member
    August 13, 2006
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    Tim, this young man will be truly blessed to have you as a brother. This poem was as much fun as it was revealing! A great poem.
    Frog


  • Salt Walker
    August 13, 2006
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    dude do you have a viper cause if you did i, i, i, would be extremly jealous and and i dont know what else to say cause them is one of my fave cars, as long as it has scoops on teh front. ok sorry wayyyyyy off track, anyways, awesome write very simple and sweet
    ^Xerox^


  • Sharcu silver member
    August 13, 2006
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    I was going to ask to be your AP brother anyways so I decided to enter your contest. Glad you liked the poem
    --Tim


  • RevHead
    August 13, 2006
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    Aww thanks tim! that was really nice of you to enter and fit yourself into the role awww I'm really feeling touched *grinning from ear to ear!!!* I thanks you very muchly Ally aka NMNM

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