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Forever

Will leave you never
Will love you more than ever
Nothing can sever.

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Written April 11th, 2003

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  • Rose Patrick
    April 11, 2003
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    THIS WAS A GOOD ONE


  • Sherry gold member
    April 11, 2003
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    Very sweet Gramps Hugs,Sherry

  • sheshe143
    April 11, 2003
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    a wonderful haiku Billbard
    i truly enjoyed!!
    visit my new ku soon!!