songbirds in green trees
when the sun comes up are pleased
greet with sweet tweet tweet.
Author notes
Written April 11th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Haikus by sunnysunnymorning02.
300 points, ended May 1, 2006, 25 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice, sunrise is the best rise, everything is active wanting to greet the sun, i could see the birds
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Very cute, indeed. Thank you for entering. Shancy.
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sweet
hehe, very cute. i liked this one, sweet and light. i don't usually take to haiku's or even poems like these, but this one was an exception. good work and keep it up!!
-quinn -
You posted a lot of poems in here and they are all good thank you for that
I almost hae run out of things to say lol so just thank you for another wonderful poem lots of love Robin...aka SH
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this made me laugh in a good way ty
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Absoluutly wonderful and amazing!
I was awakened this morning by singing birds, I love waking that way! For once this spring...it's a beautiful day with sunshine and a nice, clean spring breeze!!!
Bird song sweet
lilac scented breeze
I am content..................Laura -
Thats cute I like it.
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lovely haiku
i enjoyed so much -
I can hear the tweeting...wonderful.
Thank you,
Maria
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