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Footsteps on my soul

What do I hear?
Echoing endlessly
Footsteps on my soul

What do I see?
Visions on my mind seye
Eyes as black as coal

Who are you?
My masked defender
The one who saved my soul

Who am I?
Blind and fearful of you
Come and save my whole


Author notes

This isn't my best.... I wrote it at like midnight last night... Haha I was a little tired.
Written August 13th, 2006

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  • Unspecified
    August 15, 2006
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    Beautiful. I like the rhyming at the end of each stanza. Some very thought provoking metaphors in this piece as well. Everything you write is wonderful. Hope you're having fun. I miss you. <3

    -B'Jot