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A Sister, A Brother and a Friend


A Sister, A Brother and a Friend

As the five of us sat at the
table eating our dinner,
I realized that we were among friends.
We chatted and laughed
like we were catching up
on old times,
yet creating a memory for all times.

Bel, you are the sister
that we never had.
Knowing that we can
talk to you about anything.
Putting your own issues aside
to help those around you with theirs.
We can always tell that you care.

Blaze, like a long lost brother.
Meeting you face to face.
I felt like I had known you for years.
In your laid back manner
you spoke with wisdom.
We spoke of so much
in such a short time.

Annie, your hair golden like the sun
and a smile to brighten your day.
To get to know you is a treat.
As you sit back in group IM
and silently observe the idle rhetoric.
While others may see you as a shadow,
we will see you as a friend.

Author notes

option 3.

This poem is dedicated to...

Bel (Celticmoon)
Blaze (Blazing White Wolf)
Annie (Lakshmi)

In just a short time you have all become very close friends.
Written August 13th, 2006

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  • Tarja
    January 13, 2008

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    This was very sweet. It is so wonderful when people can come together like that. This was very moving and it's obvious that you care a great deal about these people. Thanks so much for your entry good luck.


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 24, 2007
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    Beautiful...

    It must be a wonderful thing for four people to come together and realize that they feel like they have known each other for so long...

    You write in a way that makes all of us want to meet and greet each of your friends...

    Heidi


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 6, 2007

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    This is a lovely piece. Very sweet showing your love and admiration for your family and friends. Nicely flowing, thankyou for sharing.
    Lil


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    December 18, 2006

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    Bloody Awesome!

    Ktulu, this is one facet of you that I have not seen before and quite frankly, I love it! The love you show in your work for Elizabeth and the children is something beautiful and almost rare but this piece brings out a side of you that I had almost forgotten existed in humanity. Thanks for this piece!


  • Tatianna Valcor
    August 13, 2006
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    Uncle Ktulu and Auntie Elizabeth! I loved this poem and I think it is a wonderful dedication to the friendships you share with three totally amazing people! Keep up the wonderful work and know you are both loved by us all as well! Loved the poem!


  • greyhaime
    August 13, 2006
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    that was beautiful,,,the picture you paint is great, meeting with people you have talked with for a while, is awesome,, I hope to do that aswell with a few that I know on here, that live around here.. I can't wait, to put faces, and voices with the words shared,, great write,
    Krystal


  • Blazing White Wolf
    August 13, 2006
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    oh the pleasuree was all mine guys as Bel said it was an honor breathing the same air as you two wonderfully loving couple. I am proud to call you family and friend thank you so much
    Love and light'
    Blaze


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 13, 2006
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    What a truly sweet write, my friend! How wonderfully coool that you guys could get together and share some time!
    Thanks for sharing


  • wings of an angel
    August 13, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned your rhythm flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem


  • Pretty Blue Pencil
    August 13, 2006
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    Yes, I am sure they appreciate this work, for it is lovely!


  • PoetrysAngel2041
    August 13, 2006
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    Aww, a very loving dedication to your friends. I'm sure they appreciate it. nice work!


  • MyShatteringHeart
    August 13, 2006
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    You know I think this is really nice as it is not the type of poetry you normally get on here and its a good thing. Get a lot of love and hate but friendship is not a main topic but it should be... We all need our friends. thanks for sharing your beautiful words and keep up the good work for us.


  • honey bear
    August 13, 2006
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    lovely

    this is a very lovely dedication to your friends,thank you for sharing

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    August 13, 2006
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    what a precious piece....they too must feel honored to call you thier friend...well done!


  • Silence of Finality gold member
    August 13, 2006
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    Appreciative

    You two are wicked fun, intelligent, interesting and incredibly cool. I loved meeting you, the pleasure was all mine... We'll get together again soon.


  • Celticmoon
    August 13, 2006
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    Awwww....You two are wonderful and I consider myself honored to not only know you both but to have had the chance to actually get together with you. This has touched me more than you know and if you really want to know ask Lakshmi as I am on the phone with her as we speak.......lol I look forward to getting together many more times in the future with you both and Blaze as well


  • Kari gold member
    August 13, 2006
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    Sweet!

    This was so very precious...I loved it. Congrats on your wonderful friendship and memories you will have ahead!

    Kari

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