There抯 a hidden place under the sun
where your fingers can fly to have fun,
just as you might think of
you抮e right on the brink of
poetic collaboration.
Now whenever you get there, turn right-
a lampost of script gives the light
But if you get mixed -up
you抮e instantly fixed up
near the corner of Jaden and Sprite.
The sign to the left points the sight
the other indulges the write,
慣hough both are neat places
to find friendly faces,
at the corner of Jaden and Sprite.
Come hang out where, if you're uptight
you'll loosen up here on the site.
Just cruise with your pen there,
or ask who抳e all been there-
they'll say, " Corner of Jaden n' Sprite"!
Author notes
For those new to AllPoetry, I just happened to use the names of two writers who happened to be espoused and whose gifts and presence here have inspired this little diddly.
Started it weeks ago
in the middle of the silly night.
The rhythm felt good and words fit just right.
It never left my tongue, it's easily sung,
so here's---" The Corner of Jaden n' Sprite"
Written April 11th, 2003
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How on earth do you do that!??? I love it! This piece made me laugh, but after I read it, I like wow, I wish I write like that! well anyways, I just thought I'd tell ya I really enjoyed reading this.
~*Kyndale*~
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awwwww. lovely. in the midst of trials and whatnot, i'm sure this is uplifting.
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Fun and easy to read and very enjoyable. I think you picked the right people at the right time too. we need Jaden and Sprite to know that they are in our thoughts. Love to them and you too.
Though both are neat places
to find friendly faces,
at the corner of Jaden and Sprite.
I agree totally.
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Whimsical, with a pleasant old-fashioned turn of phrase! I think you've picked the right poets' names, though I haven't read anything of there's just yet.
Lamposts, signs and hidden places are very Narnia - I wonder have you read any CS Lewis or even had his stuff in mind when you wrote this?
Flattering for the two poets involved..
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delightful
This is delightful! I love Limerick's because they sound like the old lullabies Grandma used to sing to me. Jaden and Sprite and two very fine, well-versed poets that make an adorable couple.
~Angela -
haa haaa haa haaa haaaa this is cute...
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jumpy, happy.
sounds like something for a kids show. very cute, whimsical and happy. although i can't for the life of me know who "jaden and sprite" are lol -
She even does limericks...
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She even does limericks...
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loved it! such wonderful rhythm, and scare rhyming that tied it al together...YAY for you!
-moonrider -
Wonderful! I love this piece..I'm sorry I can't help improve it, as you do for so many, but I can just say it's a fun little poem!
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How do you do that? Nice flow of rhyme!
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Oh Lordy!
I haven't heard, "WHen it comes to Harry"
in a hounds age...
Great diddy sis... About two super people.
I wonder if they ever fight over the computer..
hehehe...
Pat
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Amazeing *****
I like this so muuch. you simply amaze me. would you mined if I put you on my favorete poet page? -
Very cute limerick. Happy little tune Now I'll have to go investigate for myself whatsza happin'en at the corner of Jaden and Sprite. I might be missing out.
~Mary O -
It does sound something out of a fun Gilbert and Sullivan musical, or perhaps something romantic and light by Lerner and Loewe.
Either way, it's rather sweet, and terribly catchy!
~ Jimmy -
Excellent
I love it, I've read some of there works, though not much, but everything I read was great! This is so cute and funny, LOL!
I know they enjoyed this, how nice and thoughtful you are!
Keep'em coming Cookie, your grrrreat!
Thanks for sharing!!!
~Timothy~ -
I agree with most the people here, this was a cute and very good poem. I love the title, I love Sprite Good job.
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Bubbly and sunny
Dianne, you are really such a tonic for us all here at Allpoetry. I am sure Jaden (Slag) and Joyce enjoyed this very much. Thank you for letting us share in the overflow of your lovely soul.
Kindest Regards,
Myra -
this is great!
Those two has always showed kindness within their hearts!
I did enjoy this!
And yes...
you brought a smile to my face1
Keep taking me to places that never been to before!
Keep penning on my friend!
Bill -
This is adorable, very cute and sweet little tribute to the poetic couple :-) Love it, fun read, I enjoyed this :-)
~ Wendy -
Too cute! Nice and snappy...a great limerick.
I like limericks They're a fun way to rhyme.
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terrific,uplifting,read, so much fun
Beautiful, well done. I really like the sound. Reading in a sing-songy way. I can't sing at all! My son's talent not mine. I am tone deaf, I think. What an uplifting, fun write to read! Thanks,Di and God Bless U!
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hehe...this is cool...very happy and moving, can't say i know what jaden and sprite are, but i can look that up...
this is a very educational site...i've learnt so much here
thank you very much
i really liked the rythym and rhyme
peace
chris
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That's right. And it's Friday. We'll just keep it at a minimum..hehehe.
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Flattered, pleased, embarrassed and joyed are a few words that come to mind, but "Thank You" are the two that take up the most space. You are really really too kind, Cookie, dear. Tamara, at this corner you can drink whatever you want! Open all the time. As for you, Ce,
~ Joyce -
enchanting piece of script well done
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It can be sung to "When It Comes to Harry". A song from the musical "Calamity Jane". It's been a tyrant alright...had to finally spill it to the page!! haha..
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Hehhehe...Nyah..nyah..nayh..nyah..nyah...;p;p;p
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I like it. May have to belt out a tune on my guitar. A happy tune I'm sure!
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You've got to be kidding.
Oh boy. . .
Uh, gee, Cookie, thanks? Caught me by surprise, you did. -
When reading such poems as this.
I leave with a feeling of bliss.
Your work it inspires
The match that starts fires,
You are one fine talented Miss!!
Most enjoyable. You always bring a smile to my face and get me thinking of what to do next.
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guilty
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heheh! Thank you, Sherry. When it's Friday..gotta do something fun.
Smiles at Tamara88. We just know what's what after awhile, huh , sis?? LOL..Thank you.
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who is the brew master of this tavern?
can I order a vodka on the rocks with olives only, no alchohol
well, if you insist, ok I will have a toast with you
in the bubbly champaygne....
this is so cute Ce, I am proud someone thought of them
and honored in a way we can all relate
when times are touch
put the pen to the test
and Jaden will fine turn your indrocenreties
as Sprite tells you what a lovely joy you are here
to share the words of wisdom with the group at AP
just babbling~~~~~~
this was great, thanks Ce
and thanks to Jaden and Sprite for all they do on this site
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Well done Aunt Cookie
***** five stars
Hugs,Sherry
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