I do not know why
Nor will I ever know why
But I think...
I love you
Whenever I see you
Something within me stirrs
Something within me feels stronger
Stronger than I knew I was
I have the courage to sing stronger than before
And to fight with more determination than ever
I've always watched you
Though I doubt you knew it
I've always admired you
Though I doubt you knew more than my name
But now-you're watching me!
And I wanted to ask...
Do you think I changed?
Author notes
I love the character Hinata Hyuuga on Naruto, and can relate to her ALOT!. So, I thought I'd write a love poem that's a mix of Hinata to Naruto (^_^ cute couple ) and of me to someone I like (if I actually like anyone...XP which I don't think I do, but I'm writing this anyway)
Written August 13th, 2006
Pie! option 1
A contest entry
- Come One, Come All ``Extended and more points`` by Black Raevyn.
600 points, ended February 16, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anime/Manga Fans Welcome! by Angel Lunarious.
390 points, ended February 23, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is good I like it alot especially with Naruto and Hinata. I think that those two look really cute together. I prefer those two rather than Naruto and Sakura. I just can't picture those two together.
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wow it does sound like hinata.very good hun!
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thanks!
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Merry meet,
I think you did a good job in capturing Hinta's feelings for Naruto. It should be intersting to see if anything comes of it for Hinta. Just a suggestion, maybe fade or tone down the background. It is really hard to read the poem without highlighting it, and in my humble thoughts, really detracts from what a fine poem this is.
Amythest -
I just loved this poem! I also think Hinata and Naruto ar a great couple! You did a really great job on this! Thanks for entering!
Best of luck to ya!
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Great write. I think Naruto and Hinata would make a great couple. I can also sort of relate to Hinata as well. Best wishes and Good luck.
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yea! so I'm not crazy when I can relate to Hinata chan! I have random Hinata mode days, where I'm like "um...um.." poking my fingers, and muttering things under my breath....*sweatdrop*
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~blink, blush~ ~agrees~
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YEA!!!!! ^_______^ *neji actually smiles!*
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Hey, its fun to beat a dead horse a million times...I mean, its already dead, so it doesn't really matter, now does it?
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I really like this one my dear! so emotional so expressive and the last line leaves the reader in awe! great write, keep it up
God Bless
Becca -
XP
This is because I was watching Naruto...and there's a girl (my favorite character) who likes him, so I wanted to write a poem from her perspective-and a bit of Haruka Tsumizaki's too.
thanx
pegleg -
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*runs and embraces Neji-ni san* (well this Hinata wuvs u)
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OHHH... I want to come up with a title!
how about > Something Within Me
or
You Never Wished To Know/ You Never Wanted to Know
*thinking* no more. I like it but gem I think you have stated these facts about twenty times! (lol - in a good way) *smile* -
What a fantastic last line, it really hits in the message of the poem, the lack of identity and the wonder of this person as though the fact he / she never knew your name never mattered until now.
Really good work, well done
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