I love this new place,
He's the first to show me.
It's the happiest place.
But still there is confusion.
This place is Paradise,
Of love and happiness.
But even that has it's price.
There is always the shadows.
Overpower the shadow,
I taught myself too.
Pay attention to the good,
Take the plunge.
Put all faith and trust in him.
See where it takes you.
Let go of the bad,
Concentrate on the good.
With him with me,
I can forget all the bad.
There is no bad.
All there is is good.
Author notes
Um...First stanza was gonna be in another poem but it didn't match so I decided to make another poem based on it. You know that 'realm' that you go into when you're in love or whatever? Yeah, that is what it's talking about.
Written August 13th, 2006
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thats so awsome !!! i love it
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that is a beautiful write...full of hope and when you reach that realm...it's a beautiful place...paradise is not an impossible place...beautifullly written...smile and thank you...Dave
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