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Ben

Before I knew it, our friendship was gone,
Enough has been said, now I’m quiet and withdrawn.
Never again will I wish for your love, I’m
Just dawning on bad memories of you and me
Must be my lucky day, we’re over, I’m finally free.
I can now hold my head up, smile and think
Now it is over, and that just stinks.

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For Ben. I hope you know I'm always going to be in love with you.
Written August 12th, 2006

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  • Sad-and-Lonely
    August 14, 2006
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    awe sister! this poem is pretty much awesome. i loved it. it was short and to the point. breaking up is hard, no doubt. relationships are hard.
    love always,
    marie