Start the day
Inhaling fragrance
Heart steady
Availing patience
Eyelids down
Breathing paced
Silent sounds
Feeling graced
Burning slowly
Muscles relax
Yearning wholly
Troubles detach
Got to love those bubble baths
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Author notes
This poem is about how some of us can easily let go of our worries... which is of "common sense"
Written August 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Deep, Thought-Provoking Inspiration by Chelsea Void.
300 points, ended September 2, 2006, 31 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Amaze Me! by Shantalina.
550 points, ended February 27, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is relaxing! And I absolutely cannot stand short poems. Well done!
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Thank You
I'm glad that you like it. Most of my poetry are quite longer than this, only that having to somewhat rhyme the two word each line was very difficuly for me to pull off as I've found out along the way.
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Thanks Diseased144... heh heh... so it does seem like I was headed in that direction... that's also what I wanted to know.
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I think u smoke pot lol good poem
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Thanks Manipulate for the Silver and thanks Amythest Moonjade for your wonderful comment. There was a different one I wanted to enter, but I figured it might be too lengthy and then this one came to mind which I was hoping it would turn out to be rather cute.
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Merry meet,
congratulations on winning the Silver. mmmmm, bubble baths. Your form flowed easily, not unlike the bubbles,
. Congratulations again on your win. There were a lot of really good poems in this contest.
Amythest -
Thank you.
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I like this, it's one way of explaining how something so simple can ease the mind full of complicated worries.
Nicely done. =]
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