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The world is turning
I know I cannot feel it
Is it really true?

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Written August 12th, 2006

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  • monicaxo
    January 10, 2007
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    i like this one. its really original!


  • spacewench
    August 13, 2006
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    I enjoyed the concept behind this. Can we believe things if we can't physically see them or it. A simple thought transferred to paper.