I haven't told you baby
How you truly make me feel
For I have told you many a time I love you
But how much?
The way you make me feel is oh so sweet
I don't need reason to smile
No I feel a woman inside
Your hands calm me worse comfort me
I don't have to be afraid
Unlike anyone I've known before
I can take your hand and you lead me through the dark
I miss you every single day
I've never ever felt this way before
Your the only guy who can hold me tight
make me feel safe and want to fight
I want to be your girl forever more
You are the one for me I can feel it now
Oh I'm so glad I have you now
I've never smiled for just thinking of a guy
But that is you and you only
Please don't change baby I'm begging you please
I know how I make you feel
Or at least I know what you have said
But baby trust me
The way you make me feel is like nothing on earth
Author notes
33.... Thanks for reading hope you like.
Written August 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Song Titles by wings of an angel.
300 points, ended August 17, 2006, 14 entries
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Looking back, I can see... Well, I can remember how beautiful these feelings were... I love recapturing. I know commenting on my own work is strange but it helps me to improve and to see how different things are now and how they were in the past. Love reminding myself of how happy Karl made me... He still does, but James is kinda making things complicated at moment, though i'm not helping matters I don't think. Ha yeah essay on my own page!!!
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two thumbs up
Very sweet and loving, well done
good luck in the contest.
Edited on Aug 12, 8:39 p.m. because ''. -
This is a very good poem that you had penned here your rhythm and rhyme flow beautifully good luck in my contest
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