Tether me to a swirl of pink anemone
Wrapped up in silks of emerald and gold
Sing me a love song, with words of honey and chamomile dreams
Wake with me at the dawn of day
A soothing remembrance
Bathed in streams of the night before
Cover me
Dance with me
Embrace each and every day with me
Swirls of passion spent, moving with those to come
Bind me in daylight
Wash me in moonlight
Entwined in the colours of night and day
Cover me
Dance with me, forever, this way
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Written April 11th, 2003
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This is a smooth write. A wonderful tribute to love. I have to admit though, that I was sad that all the wild colorful images ended after the third line. You had me craving more!
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You make me want to be loved. Everyone makes it sound so wonderful when they write about it. Very nice piece here. TC xxxxxxxx
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Excellent. Your words just kind of picked me up and carried me away. Great write. Bluebird
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Lost in the words on this one
I agree very dreamy and romantic sis
Luv it
Love ya
Susan
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Great Piece
I liked this so dreamy and romantic very nicely done and beautiful.......Great write Gill xx Thanks for your comment to today on mine also. Hope your feeling betters and doing well.
Hugs to you,Sherry -
this finds a place to touch within a heart of time my friend!
I did enjoy this!
Keep finding those places that touch within the heart!
Keep taking me to places that I've never been to before my friend!
Keep penning on my friend!
Bill -
and it's related to my partner being ill at the moment... and the love we share..
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It's about love lilmev.. and if you can't see that
well it's pretty obvious... but whatever rocks your boat??? is fine...
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I dont really get the point of it , could someone please expain the main idea of it?
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Who is this about?
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Oh, Gill, there is something very sensual about this one. Utterly beautiful.
Hey, how come you and several of my other favorites are not showing up on my favorites when you have a new one up? -
Thanks Nat.. but clean up your weatabix.. it sticks like buggery.. like wall paper paste that stuff
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*Does the moon walk and spins*
Oooops!! Should have put my weetabix down first eh. hehehe pretty colours ont he wall now tho.
Beautiful write Gill, as always an amazing job well done.
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*wistful sigh* That was so beautiful and touching. I felt the words and the colors wrap around me. Wonderful write.. truly wonderful
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Thankyou everyone for your wonderful comments always appreciate you all dropping by
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Oh Gill this is so beautiful...to be wrapped up with someone in the colors of the night and the day...so lovely
Really beautiful poem girl...so dreamy
~~Dawn
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Sorry I've been missing all your newbies gilly my favourites list is broken
*growls*
Oh well. This is perdy
you make the everyday mundane and ordinary seem somewhat spectacular
Well done Gilly
Jadey xXxXx
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So soothing and tender. These words swept me up into a very desirable fantasy. I love the lines:
'Wrapped up in silks of emerald and gold
Sing me a love song, with words of honey and chamomile dreams'
A sigh of relief escaped me assuring that this will be a day filled with all things good. Thank you for this.
~Angela
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What, would you be treated like a queen?
Creamed and careened across the floor?
Cleaned and beamed by a moonbeam?
Seen as a sheen of human lore?
What are you? some queen?
Yes, you are,
And more.
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Gill. So beautiful this write. Your descriptions are a magically delicious collect of sights and colors, so vibrant and brilliant. This is an absolutely wonderful love poem that speaks to me in soft and gentle tones that delight my senses. Bravo. I applude you my friend.
Mike -
ok but...
dont yell at me
when i step on a toe!
oh... and....
i waddle a bit when i dance
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bathed in the streams of the night before....such a sweet line....this is amazing...wants to be loved this way...great piece...Peace..Mudd
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Thankyou Silica.. for your wonderful reply
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Swaying to subliminal music dancing to the drum,
Heart beat inspirational - Oh! Seductive one,
Wrap me in your rhythm, sooth me with your tune,
Colour me contented, beneath a pale moon.
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Joyce.. so glad you enjoyed it.. needed some nice lightness of just being
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Beautiful poem Gil! Oh I love this trophy.
"Swirls of passion spent, moving with those to come
Bind me in daylight
Wash me in moonlight"
Red -
I will dance forever
In tune with music so truthful
In tender words
I walk within
A soul always remembered
A walk in the park
Love ya loads girlxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Dance with me until dawn meets dusk
And bathe me in your encompassing trust
A heart so bold
A soul so tender
Wake with me and meet forever.
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