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Dearest Friend

Dearest friend sent from above
You shine your light into my life
You keep me up float
In times of confusion,
You keep me from sinking
In times of joy,
You set me flying
I'm thankful for your presence, nery
You cry for my pain
As I cry for yours
Together we take on the world
You have my back
I have yours
In this world
I couldn't ask for more
Dearest friend, my fondest wish
Is that you find your happiness
For I have found happiness
In finding you

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Written and Dedicated to one of my bestfriends...Nermin Nazim, fellow poet, surivor and all around angel. Her friendship has helped me through my life. Her wisdom and compassion astound me daily, and her kindness is something I strive to be like. Nery, your a great friend, Love always Ayten
Written August 12th, 2006

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  • Jarrod
    September 23, 2007

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    This is a great piece and glad to see you have a great friend hope can help you through the good and bad times. I am sure your friend appreciated this lovely piece!


  • Lionslove silver member
    October 19, 2006
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    beautiful!!

    This was so beautiful, sweetie!!! ...hope you got my message the other night...and thankyou so much for your care. i've found a little bit more strength this week, so, have been able to comm and write abit between rest. know that i always love you no matter how long it is in between messages or so-forth.

    anyway.......i am filled with joy that you have this friend and...i cry always at the sight of that gentler, loving side of you and always hope you're continuiing taming the beast...lol....which is also a respect i have of your strength...but ...i digress.....great write, beautiful heart and ....well.....just wonderful!!!

    i love you much...never forget.............Lionslove


  • djmadturk
    October 3, 2006
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    oh , this is very nice . I think too nermin is a special friend . very well done ..


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    August 15, 2006
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    This is really beautiful and Nermin is a really special person. I love her too! She is so sweet and very understanding!
    And everytime i talk to her, i forget how old she is lol I feel like she is 20 or 25 at the very most.

    Keep on writing,
    Nooni


  • Nermin Nazim
    August 14, 2006
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    MY TEARS ARE OVERFLOWING

    LOVE DEAREST u make me cry and i am at work, my makeup will be spoilt. i love you too. you are a greeaaaat person dear, and you give me a lot of courage. i dont know how to thank you for your beautiful kind and heartfel words, but THAT I LOVE YOU MUCH AND I THANK THE HEAVENS FOR HAVING YOU BY MY SIDE.
    LOTS OF HUGS AND KISSES

  • Guilty By Design
    August 12, 2006
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    That is very sweet of you to write a poem to your friend and it's a very beautiful poem in that.

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