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Dreams

Dreams Take You Away
To A Different Place
Where Everything Is Possible

They Take You To A Place
Where You Can Fly
And Soar Like A Eagle

Or Where You Can
Find A New Land
You Can Call Your Own

Yet No Matter How Wonderful
Your Dreams May Be
You Must Remember
To Come Back
To Reality

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  • Red Rocket
    September 30, 2006
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    Far Out

    I like the concept of this. This message needs to go to CERTAIN others in virtual reality world. Your free-style has gotten better and is on its way to becoming a butterfly of a piece.

    All The Divine Rivers Flow


  • poetryality silver member
    August 14, 2006
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    I have stood in the midst of many dreams and am grateful that they came true. I have also daydreamed many hours away. I am a dreamer but also a realist and do understand your last stanza, fully. Excellent musing here poet. I am sure all readers will comprehend the message. Great job!

    Much Love,

    Renee


  • KitsuneTenshi
    August 12, 2006
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    Thank you very much! ^_^ I'm so glad that you liked it <3 {Thank you for the applaud too!}

    As for not wanting to come back to reality... I can't answer that.. because if I could... I would still be sleeping in pure bliss. ^_^

    Anyway, thank you again! =D


  • FaeRae gold member
    August 12, 2006
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    Oh, but what if you don't want to come back to reality? This was a really beautiful poem. Sort of made me feel like for the first time in a long time that something better can always be around the corner. And for that, I give you major, major kudos.