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I am No More

A shattered world I discover
From pain, I can't be free
What's left for me to see?

Thoughts of heart and soul unsure
Day to day, to just go on
Within my shell, withdrawn

What's left for me to see?
Nothing but dreams undercover
I close my eyes forever

Within my shell, withdrawn
Soft splatters of isolated rain
Yet nothing to wash away the pain

I close my eyes forever
Thoughts of heart and soul unsure
A shattered world I discover
For I am no more

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Written August 11th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 11, 2006
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    Thank you much for your comments.

    Storm
  • SoulWhispher
    August 11, 2006
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    great

    While this is a sad poem, it is so well written with such a great flow and is a pleasure is to read, blessings John