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Yellow Sky...the whispers within


to Peace

As Yellow Sky ventured home that day
thinking of all he had seen
The time of joining fresh in mind
from all the places within that he had been

Often times he had questioned
the life he seemed to lead
Yet now what he found were words within,
a new language for his eyes to read

A call that carried along the breeze,
a whisper of Breath he saw
For what he heard seemed only to show him
a place of Ahteewah…

What could it mean to all his people,
that sound upon the Air.
He thought of all the Ancients had shown him
it was then he began looking for his teacher, Bear

“Find your Bear” rang in his ears
as if someone right next to him stood
“Find this one…” again he heard
“it is there you will find many things that are good.

A place to guide your people to,
a far away walk you will undertake
Many will follow from the Indian Nations
yet many will laugh about the journey you make.

A beacon will be upon a hill,
left there by one who cares
The Light that guides you home again,
a destiny so few now share

Remember this upon the path
for it will serve you well
There are others that have gone home,
it is now your story to tell”

Shaking his head, as if trying to wake,
from a slumber that holds him captive
Sky realizes that there is no sleep
that keeps a vision from one who gives.

He will gather those who will come,
He will do all that he can
For now he knows that destiny grows
Within a promised land


by BTB

Author's Comments:
"there are many whispers that I have heard from within...and as I have followed along my destined path, I am Grateful for the Light that guides...and for those that have left bread crumbs to follow..."Ahteewah Running Bear...home is just beyond the next Mountain we must climb"...Aho, Little Fawn"

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  • Dspiritsong gold member
    September 1, 2006
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    Excellent

    Yes daughter, we must climb...this is wonderful and mystical and I felt it in my heart...as usual with your poems You have much to give to the world, we have much to learn from you... my time is nearing it's climax and I will leave a daughter for others to depend on... I'm not leaving quite yet, and will write what the spirits give me...but you will carry on... I am proud to have you as my daughter...