At every beginning it started an end,
Many souls missing where their hearts should have been,
And then people sinning from the evil within,
Zoning in on a target is hard now and then,
In the end is where it all will begin,
No more war, No more sin,
Come together lets be friends,
Rebuild yourself an outstanding foundation,
Escape the hatred this nations been placed in,
Amazing creations take some patience,
Taking a break is only time you’re wasting,
It’s a little late because the clock is breaking,
Oblivion is no place for mortal men,
No more war, No more sin,
Something in us feels the need to win,
Before every beginning it followed an end,
You thought you were winning but where have you been?
Join us while our flag blows in the wind
America is where this all shall begin,
Sunlit skies, no storms again,
Open doors, only friends,
No more war, ever again.
Author notes
legalize marijuana
Stop fighting, please
I only wish for peace.
Written August 11th, 2006
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Outstanding
I am with you on this, written many anti-war poems.
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This was fabulous. I loved each word. the cause drove you to write a piece of meaning and beauty .... to voice an opinion shared by many but followed by few. I am as always in awe
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Wonderful poem with a very strong message of peace.it din't rhyme in all places but was really good.Thanks for entering and best of luck
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This poem is amazing, very powerful. And I just love the fact it says 'Amazin Creations By Jason' and its not forced at all. Great job =)
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Wonderful
OMG! i loved that! how great! and i like that down the side, 'amazin creations by jason'
lol, very good!i completely agree with you! really, well done.
Faythfully
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powefull amazing write really did think this was truely brilliant the lines
Join us while our flag blows in the wind
were fantastic thank you good luck in my contest
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