You call me crazy
You tell me to leave you alone
You tell me you don't love me
But you won't leave me on my own
It kills my heart when you tell me just to go away
I break down and cry when you turn and walk away
But I know you'll be back
And I know you love me still
You can't tell me not to want you
You can't tell me how to feel
Someday you'll realize
I'm the one you want to be beside you
Always
I'll keep you close to my heart
Every beat will beat for you
I know someday I will be your wife
And I'll bring your new life
Into this world
With you beside me
You can't call me crazy anymore
You don't want to be left alone
You can't tell me you don't love me
But for now...
I'm on my own........
Author notes
it just kinda flew right out of me...I kinda sang it as a song as I wrote it....
Written August 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Let's Celebrate The 60's !! by poet2angels.
300 points, ended August 18, 2006, 17 entries
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I love Patsy Cline and I could hear the songs beat in my head as I read this piece! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Frog -
Yay, it's great you're writing again. I missed you. This poem rocks! I hope you win the contest.
~*Me*~ -
Cool! I adore Patsy Cline and this was a lovely poem using her title! I agree with the previous comment, It makes ya wanna sing the song!
Lynda
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Hey there Hazy. This was good. If I send you a midi link to "Crazy" can you load it by copy/paste? Or wouldn't want to?~~Suseann edit;Sorry,wasn't one on that site.But this is emotionally grand in it's on right.
Edited on Aug 10, 3:18 p.m. because 'mistake'.
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