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Can count, but cant sum.

Just one year
Twelve months in total
Three hundred and sixty five days
Yet toiling of countless hours
Aah! a man's duty is never done.

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another senseless ranbling!
Written August 10th, 2006

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  • MaaiL
    August 19, 2006
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    COOL DUDE!


  • Navy Knight
    August 11, 2006
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    This is cool and it is a good poem so thank you and good luck. Jace.


  • NathansFather
    August 10, 2006
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    GOOD WORK

    This was a nice piece of work. You did so much with so little lines. I'm feeling like it's a good possiblity that you poem is better than mine. I wish you the best of luck.