Take me where the rivers flow
Where giants, dwarfs and dragons go
Where time begins
Where souls and sins
Know nothing of their lives below.
Author notes
Written August 10th, 2006
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
Very nice ...
and very nicely executed. I'm seldom impressed with really short poems, but this one is quite good.
-
another thought
I dream of escaping to a world
where the people labelled sinners
and the people labelled pure
rewind to a time
when they can exist
on a beautiful sense of mind
called equality.
A world Above earth...
where imaginations
breathe in possibilities like air
and our smiles blend through skin
and cuddle
in the hearts of the people we love the most
(where they belong). -
Wonderful writing
Wonderful little piece here. Great imagery as well. I wish I could go to this place you speak of.
-
That would be be a nice concept to have such a world as you dream of. Simple fact of human nature dictates, it will never happen. Bible says it can never be as well. I truely agree with you, and your wonderful poem. To bad it will never be. ~Sie
Edited on Oct 04, 1:17 because ''. -
sounds like a wonderful place to go. wish we could all find such a place for our selves. later Honeybe
-
applause
-
I want to go there!
-
Great. The rhyming is wonderful and makes it flow beautifully. Sweet and short.
cLouDs
-
A place connected to but also removed from time. I like it.
-
for earth below
yeah -
This is great
Nice work
Cindy
-
This has a striking resemblance to Midnight Moment...
So naturally, I love it
.
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
