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Nothing Comes Out (i shout! i shout!)

this knot in my throat
this cloud in my head
i cant remember what i said
this knot in my throat
i shout! i shout!
nothing comes out
so what is left
the longing, the need
i want to please
so i cry this away
i try to pray
nothing comes out
i shout! i shout!
why dont you hear
where have you been
i shout, i shout
again, again
and this is silence
is it forever
when is the end of this endeavor
i want to ask
and so i shout
nothing comes out
nothing comes out

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Written August 10th, 2006

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  • Paulies Cracker
    April 27, 2007

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    i liked this so much.. thank you very much i really enjoyed this poem!! i wish you the best of luck!!!!!!


  • campslack
    March 25, 2007
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    my fav

    seriously love this poem amazing!!! i cant even describe how awesome this one is. i love it