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Denied

I want what every girl wants
When she fucks everything up;
Forgiven, loved, and it’s forgotten,
A clean slate with a new beginning.
Except a girl like me doesn’t get it;
I’ll be punished until I walk away
Because I can’t get the things I want—
Forgiveness, love, and forgetfulness—
If you never loved me to begin with.

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Written August 10th, 2006

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  • RedRosePast
    August 10, 2006
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    Awesome

    This was awesome. I can relate. I got goosebumps reading it.


  • WulfDiamondLou33
    August 10, 2006
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    ur just like me. u should read some of my poems..i think u could relate to them. i love this poem it speaks the truth. keep up the good work and never stop writing.

    Love always
    Diamond


  • nikki5
    August 10, 2006
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    this is exactly how im feeling at the moment...u put my emotions im feelings in writing, thank u, i feel better now knowing i dont feel alone in this at the moment lol good work, keep on writing!


  • the blonde poet
    August 10, 2006
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    wow this poem makes me speechless. short and sweet explains this poem very well. and you are right every girl does want to start over new when she messes up. its natural.. nice write keep up the good work