You know you want her,
We see it in your face.
What you don't realise,
Is that she has fallen for you.
You can be as cruel as you need to,
But your lust she feels.
Why don't you tell her?
Why don't you "kiss the girl"?
She will soon give up,
She'll find someone new.
So boy, what are you waiting for?
"Go on and kiss the girl".
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inspired by "Kiss the girl" from "The Little Mermaid"
Written August 10th, 2006
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Sweet
I love this, very sweet indeed, and welcome back Honey, glad to see you writing again, let that Muse set you free, love you always Auntie Jo
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great
I love that song..I can see the whole sean in my head!!!!
this is a very cute piece of poetry adn it was a joy to read!
Nicely done! very nicely done! -
well lots of guys may be too shy or too stupid to not see what the girl they want may feel for them.. cause when she loves them it is normally so abvious.. any way there is a french proverb : 'qui n'ose rien n'a rien.' it means those who don't dare get nothing.. so we chould always dare even if we don't know what the other may feel for us.. cuz being in lov is not a shame.. it is a great and noble feeling
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She will soon give up,
She'll find someone new.
So boy, what are you waiting for?
"Go on and kiss the girl".
it is just so amazing and so pleasure words indeed... -
awwwwwwwwwwwwww this is cute I like it a lot welcome back hunny brilliant write. Much love Becky x
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines; easy to read and understand the message you are sharing here. What are you waiting for?
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Very cute and imaginative. I enjoyed reading it.
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