This pain runs so deep
unfortunatley its beginning to seep
pouring out this big black hole
causing the pain to over flow
digusted with my sorrow
they begin to run
as I lay in my puddle of pain
and see what I've become
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Written August 10th, 2006
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amazing, short sweet and meaningful to those
although im not going to post it, this sounds extremely similar to poem im sure i have... at least the writing style... so personally i like it, i can feel what its meant for, at least for me. -
I liked this!!
"as I lay in my puddle of pain
and see what I've become"
I liked that part the best...I could relate to it the most...I always look in the mirror when i'm crying and I go "What have I become?!?" I really liked this though..Great job!!
~^Sara^~
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