Dew soaked petals, sensually soft
The sweet scent of love's sweat
The perfect kiss of a rain droplet
Thunderous roars ever so bold
Betoken our lust's tempest
Beaded rivulets caress the breast
The perfect kiss of a rain droplet
Scorched hot from igneous sin
Pleasures bound from deep within
Beaded rivulets caress the breast
Jolts fly both body and sky
In love, our crest draws nigh
Pleasures bound from deep within
Thunderous roars ever so bold
Dew soaked petals, sensually soft
This storm's passion to unfold
Author notes
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Written August 9th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensual Rain3 (to award trophies only) by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended August 11, 2006, 1 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you love, most appreciated.
Storm -
Dear
This flower so empowers
offering by its touch
petals from its bowers
glistening with nectared lust.
AT -
Thanks Vickie, what other way would there be from the Storm?? lol Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
This is beautifully passionate Autumn. Nice coming from the Goddess of the Storms. Good luck.
~Val -
Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
This is a nice Hott Storm!
Thanks for sharing you, nice word choice, and the background rocks! 
Keep up the wonderful works, and all the best to ya, Timothy The Poetic Weaver~ 
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Very, very nice one Storm, the sensual words, and imagery put the reader with you in the storm. As well as with you in your heart. I really like this one, way to go.
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Thank you hun, I appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Beautiful
Sensual honest heartfelt physical need, to quench natures desires that none of us can escape.Nor want to.
Beautiful desire in perfect form. Showing your true feminine inner feelings.Poetry in motion. -
Thanks for the comments Sandy. Glad you enjoyed it.
Storm -
Ooooh girl! Whew! It was already dang hot in West Texas but it sure did just get HOTTER!
I LOVE this! I knew I could count on the "Storm Goddess" to write a passionate, "stormy" one!
Thanks for sharing, gf!
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