I'm 6 years old...
I get babysat, when my mommy spends time with jack...
My babysitter has a boyfriend
His name is Billy
He does bad stuff to me
It hurts me really bad
but if i don't let Billy do it
he says i'll never see mommy again
that mommy would not love me no more
so i let him do it
i dont want to lose mommy
now he tells me he loves me
I'm so happy!!!
my mommy tells me that too
daddy never did...
maybe billy can be my new daddy
we can be a family again
all of us, even my 2 brothers
wait...why is billy letting this mean man take me?
He hurt me the same way billy did at first
why is that mean man giving billy money?
does billy not love me anymore
another man is paying him
he does the same thing to me
i hurt really bad
why doesn't billy love me anymore?
Author notes
option 4
gives you a inside look on what goes through a 6 years old head when she is being raped and prosituted
darkestcorners3
my fav
Written August 9th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Rape[&&Disgrace] by WishMeAway--x.
450 points, ended May 27, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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god, so sad.
thats the thing that has gotten to me in this contest. all the kids that are raped. it doesnt just happen to those of us who are older.
thank you for the story. however sad it is.
♥Chaos -
Very sad write you wrote here. It is even sadder because it is true. I hope that the girl get some help and put the bad mans away. I feel sorry for the girl.
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this fucking sickens me. good poem. sorry if you take my comment in a bad way, is the subject.
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well it's in a rape contest.
and it happened to someone in my family.
so it's not my mind that thought it up.
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This is amazing... it is just horrible that someone would rape a little girl!!!!!!! I hope this is only thoughts and not what really happened to you!!!!!!! I loved this right and hope you did/do great in the contest!!!!!!! Rock On!!!!!!! APPLAUSE!!!!!!!
xoxo
Meg
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Powerfully written!!!
OMG this is so sad and yet oh so beautifully done from a stan point of view. it iss ad that you wrote from a little girls point of view that young yet brilliant and beautifully done. I agree you definitely deserve to get at least HM for this poem. You wrote it from a little girls point of view and yet you powerfully written it with great command. excellent poem and all round nice work. Good Luck in the contest.
Sincerely, Paul
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oooooo i loved this one alot, you have so much talent its just
really amazing -Kevin -
I hope this did not happen to you. If so I am so sorry. I know things like this do happen in real life, though I hate to think about it. Your poetry is well written. Thank you for sharing this piece. I wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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This is really sad, and I can also relate. Well done, very moving story.
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OMG!!! This was one of the most heart breaking poems I've ever read. You could just see the innoscense of the little girl pouring out in every line. That poor little girl that doesn't understand why they do this to her! Oh, it was just amazing! I loved it!
PS. I suggest you read rule ten quickly before you are DQ'd!!!
~Darkest~ -
Actually, if you want me to be specific, parts of this did rhyme.
Billy, me, mommy, me, happy, daddy. 
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well thank you....it happened to someone i loved.....so it was a little easier to write
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Wow... puts into perspective what really goes on. This is a well earned gold on this poem. Congratulations!
Great job, simple, but deep in meaning. You stepped into someone else's shoes and did a good job at writing it.
--Tim -
Awww thanks auntie!! u always put a smile to my face!!
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Congratulations Cherie!! You definitely deserved gold for this write!! I'm sure this is only the first of many trophies to adorn your author's page. Auntie is so very proud of you!!
~*Auntie Lori*~ -
that is SOOO sad! you will do VERY good in this contest. bravo! thanks for entering and good luck!
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yeah i know its sick espically when its about someone you love the very most
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Oh god... This is sick, I can't believe this is a true story...that's so horrible...! You did a wonderful job of getting into the mind of a six-year-old, especially with your diction and whatnot. Well done...
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thanks you dont know how happy that makes me, i didnt want to portray this little girl wrong....
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Cherie, this is a moving and horrific write. This stirred me deeply. I like the style of being told through the child's voice, how she feels and how it's affecting her. This piece is strong, bold, and heartbreaking. Very painful to read, but we have to fight the horror of child abuse. NO child deserves to be violated. Keep up the great work hun!! Auntie loves ya!!
~*Auntie Lori*~ -
wow cherie thats really....well you really nailed the topic
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yeah well i dont know how it really is it isnt about me...but someone i really love...she let me know kinda how she thought at that age...i despise...him
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Deep
Awwwww Sweetheart this one really gets to me as I was abused sexually at 9 years of age, and it's horrifying, you wrote this so well, scum like that should be hung in my opinion sorry but I stand very strong on this subject Love you always Mum
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