You stole my heart,
Then broke it in pieces,
And shattered my sense of sanity.
Almost a couple,
But not quite there,
Best friends, you said,
But that was a lie.
I loved you,
And you felt the same.
I know what changed.
A mere fight,
A piece of cruelty in you,
That I never saw before.
You lied to me,
And took my heart.
And even though you did,
I shed no tears over you,
Not then and not now.
A big heart,
Shattered in pieces,
It didn't even leave me hurting,
Just empty.
Author notes
this is the FIRST poem i have written all summer. after a huge fight with the guy i thought i loved, i came down with a major case of writer's block, be very critical, because i havent written in a LONG time!
Written August 8th, 2006
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You did good tho, I love this. And it is perfectley said.
I enjoyed readin it and relating to it.
I find its sometimes best to be hurt, for an inspiration to write, and you did well.
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thanks! =]
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well hey i feel this is a great piece ok written from the heart very well done awsome writing
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