Torn ribbons are laced preciously on her mutilated wrists
She's invisible in your eyes, it seems as if she doesn't exist
Toxic tears wear away at her broken porcelain face
The mirror shows the ugly, unworthy disgrace
Keep taunting her and breaking her down
Pretty soon she will no longer be around
But you don't care, you find amusement in her pain
In her eyes is a hint of endless shame
Hiding in her room, with the razor in hand
The tragedy soon to come will be so unplanned
Your words swirl in her aching head
You're about to eat every word that you have said
The razor slides across her numb, fragile skin
Releasing the agony that bottles up within
The room reeks with self mutilation and self hate
There was no escaping this one tragic fate
Your unmerciful words made it to her wrist
You made her feel useless, unworthy to exist
It doesn't matter now, she lies on the floor dead
She would have been better off if those words were left unsaid
Author notes
this fucking sucked! been having some writers block for a while. tell me what you think
Written August 8th, 2006
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I like this alot. I think i like your poetry so much because alot of times i can relate to it. Keep up the good work!
-Lacey -
wow that is a great poem! i like the emotion and feeling. great write!
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LIAR!!!!!!!!!
YOU BI.TCH!!! IT DOES NOT SUCK!!!!! Personally I think it rocked. Not your best, but good nonetheless!
~Crissi
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This did not suck..
It pulled me in on the first line.. Beautiful write.
Actually, I do beleive your poem just gave me thoughts to write. And well.. i've been going threw writers block, too. So thank you! : ) -
ISABEL. This so does NOT even suck >.< You're crazy. I love this ^.^ The flow is pretty good and as always the rhyming is excellent. The words fit together so well and the imagery is good too. Great write, it definitely does NOT suck ^.^
xxJessieMK -
Isabel are you serious? This poem fucking ROCKS not sucks. I liked it a lot. I think I know where the "insperation" came from. Awesome write Isabel, I liked it a lot!
I SM"ORE YOU!
Me
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this is lovely i cut till about 4 months ago i dont need to anymore thought if i feel into another depresion id go right back i have no regrets i never tried to commit suicide through cutting though i know of a friend who has its always a pleasure of mine to read poems about cutting cuz i can relate
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PAINFUL..in a good way
wow...the pain and description in the poem is so real its scary. The flow of your words makes every word peice together like a puzzle. Its so dark and painful it makes the room feel almost akward....VERY NICE. I love it thanks for this poem -
this is the kind of stuff i like to read bout...its really good.
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