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Me and You ( middle part)

still not donw..but its more...

Whats goin on in my mind.
When my answers you try to find.
As you sit there and wonder,
Your heart I want you to surrender.
When you turn to see tears in my eyes,
You call them my stars from my skies.
Your there for me to hug and hold,
My secrets your ears have been told.
You kiss my cheek good nite,
Yet offer to hold me until the morning light.
You are there for me through the ups and downs,
You even turn upsidedown my frowns.

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Written April 9th, 2003

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  • poeticsloth
    April 10, 2003
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    this is verry good and i like the wording and it evean rymes verry good just to let you know