I think I would call you if I had the time
But my scar is too deep, and now I can't call you mine.
I dreamed you last night, I dreamed of the past
But you showed me love never lasts.
We used to look at the sky
and live each day and never ask ourselves why
the love we had was fading quick
then tension between us was becoming thick
I learned to forget you, though it took awhile
Now I don't need you to be able to smile
But then you come crashing back in, you always knew how
To open my heart, you don't use a key, you use a plow
Now i'm busy with someone i've caught
But your never far from my thoughts
I think I would call you, but I haven't the time
Time has healed my scar, and now I can't call you mine.
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Written August 8th, 2006
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I like this very much, this is something many people can relate to. It's not your best, in my opinion, but it is definitely good. The only problem I had is the line,
"To open my heart, you don't use a key, you use a plow"
It didn't flow well, it threw off the poem for me. Maybe if you didn't use three different parts? Something more along the lines of, "You broke the key to my heart and used a plow" ?
It just got very ----- stop ----- stop -----
Kind of?
I'm sorry if you don't understand what I'm saying, 'cause at this point I've confused myself. x[
All in all, great write. <3
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