Chapter One
Fifth year was finally over and summer was here at last! Dew and Draco had arranged going on a cruise for a week. However, both of them could not tell their parents that it was a romantic and perhaps erotic cruise. Dew told her parents that she was staying in Diagon Alley for eight to nine days. Draco, on the other hand, could not tell his father that he was going to spend time with his beautiful muggle-born girl friend. He told him that he would be doing some studying to help in the following year, but when asked where he would not answer and Lucius Malfoy gave up! Dew met Draco in front of the Leaky Cauldron and from there she took him in her mother's car and drove him to the port, where the was a 'boat' awaiting them. The car, the cassette, the air conditioner and everything else in the car fascinated Draco. It was hard to explain how everything worked so Dew tried to give tell him everything with simplicity. They arrived at the port. There was a parking area on the left and there they parked.
Dew lead the way, followed by Draco carrying their bags and pulling Dew's. She met the owner of the cabin cruiser they were taking and he explained how everything worked. Draco could make neither head nor tail of what he said so he went outside. The air was fresh and blew gently on his face. The owner showed them how everything worked and put them to the test in steering and anchoring and everything else. They returned him to the port, where he left them. They left as soon as they had dropped him.
"Do you like it?" asked Dew.
"I love it!" Draco said. "But how are you going to remember all what that man said. I don't think I'll be much help because I could hardly understand anything!"
Dew waved her hand and a parchment and quill appeared in mid-air. Everything the man had said, the questions Dew had asked and his answers, everything was neatly written on the parchment. Dew waved her wand and the parchment rolled into a scroll while the quill disappeared.
“You are brilliant!” said Draco.
Inside was bigger than what it look like on the outside. There were two small rooms, a bathroom and a very small kitchen. Their rooms were opposite each other, with no doors, only separated by a curtain. Draco’s room was on the left and Dew’s was on the right. On Draco’s left there was the bathroom and to his right were the stairs leading to the deck and behind them the kitchen. They began to unpack into the small cupboards next to their beds. Dew took the room with the big bed. It was slightly bigger than Draco’s.
It was sunset when they had finished unpacking. Dew put on a one-piece swimsuit and went outside. With magic, they moved quicker than they would have. Now there was nothing in sight. So they let down the anchor. Draco was still in his black jeans but had no shirt on. He followed her outside. She jumped into the water. It was a few seconds before she reappeared. But she did not simply reappear; she jumped out of the water as if she were bitten. She ran down, dripping water, and entered the shower pouring hot water over head and body. Draco stood in front of the tub and watched her, with a puzzled look on his face. After Dew had regained her breath she said, “The water's freezing!”
Draco went back to his room and undressed but remained in his boxers. Dew got into an ivory night-gown that fell above her knees and had thin straps. Draco kissed Dew’s cheek, then her lips and went to bed. They both fell asleep instantly.
The following morning, Draco woke up at the smell of omlettes. Dew was in the kitchen. Two plates and forks were on the table and she was at the stove. She laid the pan on a towel on the table. He came from behind her, hoping he would not scare her. He wrapped his arms around her and began kissing her neck. She ran her hands up and down his arms. Draco sat down as Dew got some bread.
“Do you want your eggs in a sandwich?” She asked.
“Anything, I don’t mind.” He answered.
They had their breakfast and went outside in the sun. Draco lay down and stretched his legs on one of the sun-loungers. Dew got some pumpkin juice, laid it on the table and sat on his lap. Draco sat up again and began to caress Dew. Pushing aside the gown’s straps to fall off her shoulders, he began kiss her neck and shoulders. Dew giggled with excitement. She felt his tongue on her neck then more kisses. Her skin was very smooth and silky. She was a white but not pale. She managed to turn and they stood up. There was a ‘crack’ and they were in Dew’s room. While they were kissing, Dew slipped off Draco’s boxers and he slipped off her gown and pushed her on to the bed. He ran his hands up and down her body and finally rested them on her breasts. Her nipples hardened under his fingers as he played with them. He slipped a hand between her legs then up to her thighs and into her underwear. As he entered a finger in her pussy, he felt her getting wet. So, he entered another finger and stroked her gently. Dew moaned and pulled him closer to her. She could feel his hard manhood rubbing against her underwear.
“Take it off!” She begged.
And off was her underwear, making her grow wetter. Draco rolled over her, still kissing her neck. Then, sliding down, he began licking her nipples, right, left, then right again. She ran her nails over his back and moaned. Then cupping her breasts with his hands he took her right breast into his mouth. She could feel his tongue playing with her nipple and her entire breast. She squeezed his ass and squirmed. He got her right breast out and took the other one into his mouth. She began fondling her breast full of Draco’s saliva. After letting go of her breasts, Draco dived down and opened her legs and began licking and eating her. Dew let out wondrous sounds and moans. Making Draco harder than ever and making him want to eat her more. She tasted beautiful. He could lick her forever he thought. Finally, he got his tongue out of her pussy about half an hour later. He began moving over her, his manhood touching her body. She could not stand it anymore.
“Get in or else!” she ordered.
Draco thought he would let the “or else” for another day. He did not want to exhaust her on their first day. So, obediently he entered her. As he did, he licked her breasts and nipples once more then she pulled him by the hair to her mouth. Their lips touched and their tongues wrestled together, while his dick was in her pussy. Everything was in its place! They cummed on each other. And went on having sex for a few hours, till finally they were exhausted and out of breath, they fell asleep till the following morning.
to be continued....
Author notes
This is my first erotica story. Is it good??
(it is also based on a roleplay and there is still more to come) so keep checking every now and then
Here is the link to part 2: allpoetry.com/poem/2269822
(Option ONE)
Written August 8th, 2006
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the love making description is detailed and tangible. u can actually c what happened between the two and u enjoy every part of it feeling as is u were one of the characters yourself
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Fantastic imagery
I found the scenes really vivid and imagery is very much alive..Good job
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this is good the 5th part makes alot more sence now it is really good. Oh the immages flowing through my head.
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first time I read an erotic story based on Harry Potter
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Glad you enjoyed reading this
You should check out the rest of the series
I just wrote and posted part 5 a couple of days ago.. but I would suggest that you read them in order!
If you need the links, IM me
ENJOY!
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Not bad for a first attempt I must admit. this did make me a lil hott! lol. There is another writer on here who also does a fantastic job on erotica. and she also has a harry potter fiction goin. this is great. wonderful job on this!
~Sorrow~
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Thank you so much. I'll be sure to IM you when I post part 3
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very good
uh well hot hot hot lol
but i kept wondering why they didnt do it on d 1st night or if they were tired why didnt they sleep in d same bed just to cuddle and huddle
anyway good work cant wait 4 part 3
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This was a really good write. I was kind of looking for something a little more reality. This would be really good if there were more passion written into it. Thank you for enetering my contest.
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Thank you so much Emily for reading Part one as well. And thank you for applauding it. I will IM you as soon as I post part three. Thank you for your interest in my work.
Nooni
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I just finished reading part one and now i get the whole thing. You wrote it really good I never thought that Draco would go with a "Mudblood"as he calls them in the movie. This was an excellent work Great Job. P.S. you started the poem really good if it were me i wouldn't know where to start. you really do have good talent.Emily
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GOOD?? Hell yes!! Dayum, first time? Well you definitely have a talent for it! Now going in search of Part 2!!
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Thank you sunshine. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. I think you'll enjoy part Two more!
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Nooni,
Whoa!!!!!!!!!!! This is great! Cold shower time! And this is your first? Wow!!!!!!!!!! This is really good for the fist time! Will have to read the second part for sure! -
Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my story twilight. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Yazzah! What a delicious delectable piece of HP erotica. Dew seems forceful, v. nice on her part. YOu made it pretty sexy, and I like the fact that they don't have sex right away. Excellent way to keep us reading.
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Thank you so much V. I am so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for applauding it too. There is a first time for everthing and in my case there is a second time too! lol
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well, I am speechless I think... This is SOOOO different for you! Interesting that you used Draco from Harry Potter. I wasn't expecting that. Good job. I must say that my face got a little red while I was reading it however! haha, really good job though. I am off to read the next one!
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Thank you so much kahy. I am so so glad you enjoyed reading. I must admit you are in luck coz I just wrote part TWO today and I just posted it. here is the link:
allpoetry.com/poem/2269822
have fun, Nooni
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SONOFA... Oh sorry. Here I am reading along and enjoying the story and I have to wait for part two? Are you freaking kidding me!!!!!. Oh my God. You better and I am saying this nicely, send me a link to part two. Dang it. I don't wanna wait. Please hurry and finish part two darn it. Excellent story. You've done a great job. Kahy
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Thank you so much lady Eclipse for your wonderful comment on my story.
I will be posting a second part to this, but when I finish reading Macbeth (I have to finish that damned play before I can enjoy doing anything lol)
Thank you so much for applauding, and I'll check out your work soon.
Nooni
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I thought it was good. I liked the story you portrayed but didn't get who dew was untill I read the roleplay.
Anyway great job, I love HP fan-fic and even write it myself and knowing that you truly have to know the hp world in order to write it I think you did good for your first erotica. Keep it up! ~Eclipse
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Thank you Hana for reading and applauding.. I think the naughty muse is coming again soon... so await part 2! -
woohooo!
w bet2ouli ana bayza???????
This is just lovely!!!! Nada!! Seriously, I loved every bit!
Such a great one!
are you sure this is your first?
Can't wait for the sequal.
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Thank you so much Dark Angel. Sorry, I just saw your comment now. I'm really glad you liked it. You made me smile and blush. I'm glad you don't want me to stop either.
I'll IM when I post more.
Nooni
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i was just kidding, is just that so few fantasy left i feel like i cant escape nowhere, besides, they arent that grown up, i mena, im seventeen and im sure my dad wouldnt allow me to go alone with my girlfriend in a cruise, besides, you are 17 according to your biography, you sure are very promiscuous (im not wanting to be rude) or watched a hell of lot of porn
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i'm not the only one who uses harry potter charcaters in sex scenes besides they are grown up now
Dew is my character or my creation that is.. and this is Draco Malfoy
.. I like Harry... but he can have anybody else..
Are you dead yet???
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who the hell is Dew? why combine harry potter and sex? so few things left in this world left for fantasy to take us away to that special place and you had to put sex in it, im so sad, im gonna kill myself
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I'm glad you did Warious.. I'll IM as soon as part two is posted although people have to be asleep around the house and my sister out of sight
Thank you for applauding.
Nooni
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Very good
What?!?! I have to wait for the next part?!?
Darn. -_-
Brilliant stuff Nooni-chan! I look forward to reading more as time progresses ^_^
You might try to avoid the common Grammar mistakes of non capitalization. (only done once to my recalling)
Cute interaction from both people ^_^
I loved it.
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thank you for reading and commenting Dave. I'm glad you liked it.
Nooni
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thank you soo much for reading and commenting Elizabeth. I'm really glad you liked it. I'll check out your story, thankx for the link. And thank you for applauding my story.
Nooni
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outstanding write and such an intense story...beautifully done...Dave
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Muahaha... oh, another one after my own heart!
I remember this contest. I wanted to enter my Draco masterpiece, but there was no Dew, so
(p.s. if you're interested: allpoetry.com/list/30024 )
Anyway, this was not bad at all for a first attempt. Reading erotica will definitely help you figure out how to paint a sex scene... it's tough at first, but with practice, it gets easier.
P.S. I love the bit about Apparating into the bedroom!! I should have thought of that... argh... well, I guess they couldn't have Apparated inside Hogwarts anyway. shrugs Good thinkin' though.
Elizabeth
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thank you soo much for reading, commenting and applauding sorrows. I'm really glad you liked it. I'll IM when I post part two. give me a couple of days though
Nooni
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ooo... awesome job! i like how you brought in draco malfoy from HP. he's one of my fav. characters... keep up the great work, i can wait to see more of your work! -
thank you soo much. I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you for applauding it.
Nooni
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ooooh! this was good... the first story on AP that I really really enjoyed reading! aesome job there girl!
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