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Our love

There is a love you cannot touch
but feel as it surrounds.
Love that is communicated through
eyes on a single thought of the heart.
Love unquestioning and without
boundaries; transcending space and time.
Love for all to have but found
by precious few.
Our precious ones have found this love--
their love.
Love that has been before time began
and until all time should end.SKYE2006

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WROTE THIS FOR MY DAUGHTER'S WEDDING.
Written July 15th, 2006 sharon

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  • daviscth silver member
    October 29

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    Your words are very beautiful and the imagery is perfect. You have created a wonderful wedding poem dear. Thank you for sharing it in my contest.


  • rose petal desires
    May 27, 2008

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    this was a very nice poem here i think you did a very great excellent job with penning your work here thanks for entering the challenge


  • Rachel21
    May 10, 2008
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    this is very nice


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    May 9, 2008
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    Welldone poem. Good Luck in my contest


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 5, 2008

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    thank you very much for this fine poem entry into the contest for jonny and april. i wish you the best of luck in the judging. viyanna rosemarie


  • Shancy Fayre
    February 27, 2008
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    Thank you for entering my contest. You may want to check your spelling. Shancy.


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    October 11, 2007

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    very beautiful. Your daughter is blessed to have someone write such a beautiful poem for her wedding Thanks for your entry to the contest

  • OurxBeginning
    August 11, 2006
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    This is really pretty and I liked the meaning behind it. I think the caps take away from your write a little though. All in all, easily related to and simple. Thanks for entering and good luck.
    Edited on Aug 11, 10:40 because ''.

  • Miss Yorik
    August 8, 2006
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    A beautiful little poem! And so lovely as it is for your daughter!

    LOVE THAT IS COMMUNICATED THROUGH
    EYES ON A SINGLE THOUGHT OF THE HEART.

    Yes, it is a very special love. And

    LOVE THAT HAS BEEN BEFORE TIME BEGAN
    AND UNTIL ALL TIME SHOULD END

    Thank you for sharing. And good luck in the contest.

    Melanie

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