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Me and You

Comment: Im not done yet..it came to me on this part only..I'll keep workign on it

Whats goin on in my mind.
When my answers you try to find.
As you sit there and wonder,
Your heart I want you to surrender...

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Not done yet :( I kinda got stuck...I'll finish it later..
Written April 9th, 2003

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  • finding myself 84
    April 9, 2003
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    I know how this feeling is! A great thought comes into your mind but only enough words to make up one stanza! Let me know whenever you finish this poem! *sonya*

  • sheshe143
    April 9, 2003
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    an excellent start
    thanx for sharing