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Choir Class for Kitty

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Whadda ya mean I can't play the piano?
Whadda ya mean I have to sing?
Teacher, teacher, don't you know,
I gotta knack for this thing?

Lookie here, lookie here
I got four paws you see.
I can prance along these keys,
To make a rockin' melody.

Oh fine, alright already,
If singin's what you wish.
Hey, just be sure to reward,
By throwing me a fish.

And perched upon the ivory,
I purred, let's start this show.
"Meow, meow, meow....
What?!?! It's the only song I know!

Chalk it up to inspiration,
From good ole' Morris the cat.
I bow down to his talent,
To him I tip my hat."

Ok, so that didn't work
And teacher's kinda mad.
Jeez, what more does she want?
I'm just a kitten lad.

Ok, ok, I get it
I still have to sing.
Give me just a minute,
Let me prepare for this thing.

I sucked in air, chest drawn in,
I had to hit that chord.
Before I knew what happened,
Like a lion I had roared.

Teacher now was smiling,
Obviously quite pleased.
Hurry, I got to finish,
Oh no, here comes a sneeze.

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Written August 8th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 17, 2006
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    Thank you for the comments. The picture will be back. My membership is lost somewhere in limbo and being taken care of. So he pic is gone until then.

    Storm

  • mzblondemoments
    August 17, 2006
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    This was a very cute poem. Although there is no picture at the top maybe when you edited it you lost the picture, anyway I think you have done a great job on this piece. I also love cats. I have one that is a bit weird and also very lazy

    Best of luck to you in the contest!!!



    ~much love~
    carol

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 15, 2006
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    Ooops, corrected it. Thank you for pointing that out.

    And thank you for your comments, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • Pollycheck silver member
    August 15, 2006
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    Thank you for entering my contest. I think that you have done a very good job with the picture that you were sent. It is a humorous and well thought out poem. I have noticed a typo:

    Teacher now was smiling,
    Obviously quites pleased.
    Hurry, I got to finish,
    Oh no, here comes a sneeze

    I think what you meant to write was:

    Teacher now was smiling,
    Obviously quite pleased.
    Hurry, I got to finish,
    Oh no, here comes a sneeze

    Overall a very good poem.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 11, 2006
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    Thank you for your comments, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • TheCrazyBeautiful
    August 11, 2006
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    "'Meow, meow, meow....
    What?!?! It's the only song I know!"

    Aw, how cute is that? This is silly, and enjoyable. A cute poem to go with a cute picture. Good luck!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 8, 2006
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    LOL, thank you for the comments, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • sandgoddess
    August 8, 2006
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    enchanting!! - a joy

    bless you Storm...I love cats (got 3) and i love this poem, it's tottaly enchanting.

    me is gonna goes naw and reads it agan

    good luck!
    rachel
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