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Change is hard

My heart is in distress
I can't go on with this
Why now, why this
How can this be happening to us
What can we do?
Change can make everything different
Even for friends
Something changes and it never goes back
Change is hard to deal with
Why can't this be a MYTH?

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Written August 7th, 2006

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  • Alyss in Wonderland
    November 9, 2006
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    lol. maybe


  • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
    November 9, 2006
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    they're buggin me lyssa. I just realized what you were going a few poems back. Jeez, if it annoys me, maybe it has a chance at annoying darren.

  • Alyss in Wonderland
    November 9, 2006
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    ...maybe it will. I never know with you. You are the 'unpredictable 3rd' in a good way, but I don't know if all of the pointless comments and run on sentences will bug you.....

  • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
    August 9, 2006
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    Why can't it be a myth? Nobody knows, nobody knows. And if anyone did, I would pay them lots to tell me. but, anyway, the repeating questions really make your poem seem dramatic and emotional. Great job, and good luck in the contest.
    ~dreamer

  • Alyss in Wonderland
    August 8, 2006
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    really good poem...it really puts the stupid thing into words. i really like it...gaah! i can't take it anymore!!! this situation stinks...

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