scream your thoughts its the way
to regret it soon
and to kill off everyone.
I slam you in..to the bed
keep you from freedom
'til anybody comes.
"sleep with one eye open
gripping your pillow tight"
exit right
enter fear
take this chance
off to a better place.
this is great, dim the light
deep pressure tonight
and the thoughts aren't you.
dreams alone
aren't this great
but the pain is bearable
and the way you bite, YEAH!
"sleep with one eye open
gripping your pillow tight"
exit right
enter fear
take this chance
off to a better place.
now you lay me down to sleep
pray the lord my sin shall take
if I die before it ends
pray the lord my soul to keep
......
exit right
enter fear
take this chance
off to a better place.
(repeat til fade)
Author notes
..::Inspired by Metallica's ''Enter Sandman''::..
Enjoy!
Written August 7th, 2006
*Metallica* ~Enter Sandman~
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An intense [poem but very hard to read because of back ground. Hard to judge because I am straining to much
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Im sorry... I changed it if you want to read it now....
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Niiiice
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