Another tear
F
a
l
l
i
n
g
Streaking down
The f a c e
In the [cracked] mirror
Just *Wishing*
E v e r y o n e would
Leave me alone
Let me stare at the full ((moon))
And ~cry~
Just +Watching+ Everyone
D r i n k i n g
&& Laughing
It was so /Hard/
Not to drink too.
So /Hard/ not to
Lose to it
A g a i n
No one understood
The *Silent*
Battle
No one
Even [[ c a r e d ]]
A bbbirthday *Wish*
A day of
-Happiness-
[Fucked] Up
Like my life
Like me!
So many {Things}
To cope with.
Lies/Secrets/Friendships/Families
Piling up
Dr o wn i ng me.
And no one cares.
Its just another /Broken/ Haert
Just another
Tear.
Its just /Her/
Its just \ M e \.
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Written August 7th, 2006
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applaud, you lucky duck
Oooh, I like this. Just like Fallen forever said, I like the form and structure of it. Adds more power to the words and meaning, I think. But even without all the fancy stuff it would still be awesome. It's very emotional (obviously) and it really just draws you in. And right about now is the point where I sound completely retarded.
. Yep, great poem 
Jeanette*~ -
Wow. That's amazing. I adored it. So emotional. Pure raw emotion. Really beauitufl. The structury thing was good too. All in all evrything about this was amazing. I loved it
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