Done - Kelsey Taylor
She hung her head low
And wore her sleeves long
Her hair swept over her face
With mascara running down
She kept to herself
And never said a word
Never showing her tears
Or her fears of how this might end
She kept scarring her arms
As a release
And then realized
With terrified eyes
Things would never be the same
She started crying and feeling the pain
And know her arms were sore and read
She cut a lot worse as she cried
Never knowing that in a couple days
She’d die
So this was the end
Of a beautiful girl
Who never experienced happiness
Or love
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Written August 7th, 2006
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"her arms were sore and read"
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I personally think this porm isn't such a great write. It's an "easy write", with not much thought. -
great
wonderfully put and great job i like it alot keep up the good work -
heart-wrecking, deep, but a great write, i felt like i was her, not that im much different anyway, but i liked it alot!
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so tragic, so dark. so wonderfully done. i hope this was no one you knew.
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