Cinderella,
O Lovely Cinderella!
You get up with the birds,
How Wonderful!
Your step sisters,
Create so many blisters!
Your step mother,
How much can she bother?
Cinderella,
O Lovely Cinderella!
Waiting for her true love to come and take her away,
How can you bear this stay?
Your Prince Charming will come soon to take you,
Since how long are they telling this to you?
Cinderella,
O Lovely Cinderella!
Well, Now your Prince Charming has come to take you away,
Will you ever forget me?
Please never do!
Cinderella,
O Lovely Cinderella!
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Written August 7th, 2006
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Cuteeeeeee! =]
Hii! Atlast after sooo many EXCELLENT poems.. there is a GOOD one! I was tired commenting on them.. but this one is so UNIQUE and AMAZING! And obvio. CUTE!
Love all your poems..! 
And as Shuvi said.. it can be used as a nursery rhyme for children.. well, she is so RIGHT!
Lots of Love,
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Very good!
Very cutely written, aptly describes my feelings when i read this fairy tale...you know what, this cud be used as a nursery rhyme for children~!~!~! -
Great write! ^_^ Thanks for commenting on one of my poems.. thought I'd return the favour.
But anyway yeah.. this was a good write. The rhyming flowed well and it had this fable-feel to it.. I like stories that are based on fairytale, and the 'Cinderella, O Lovely Cinderella' repeat worked well. Great job.
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thanks!
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Good poem PoEt BaBe, I thought it was a great piece, Cinderella is so sweet, but a horrible family
lol
good luck in the contest
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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very cute. i loved it. i must say it's a pretty different take on cinderella. reads really smooth and flows beautifully. your talent surprises me each time. keep penning my friend.
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adorable
Thats really sweet my friend...i love cindrella..such a cute animated character..adorable poem! I like it..its smooth and gentle...besided nerds mean a person who studies a lot so it doesnt suit there..maybe sth else..otherwise its sweet!
~~~PREETI~~~
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Good Job! It was a good write! Keep up the good work!
<3 Kay
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