It has been a while since I have seen your face
I can t believe you gave up
Gave up on the human race
Why didn t you tell me, I know you have pride
But things like bullying you should not hide
I spoke to the boy, who was to blame
His heart is broken, his life full of shame
You were so good, his life was sad
He made your life hell, so his would not look bad
The first time he did it, he said it was fun
But deep inside he knew it was wrong
He said he was sorry, wishes he could bring you back
He ended his own life, as his life came of the tracks
I could see the weakness in his blue eyes
I could nt feel sorry for him, as he ruined my life
I wish he had realized before that day
Maybe I would not have hurt in such a way
If it had stopped one day before,
My son would not have been dead on the floor
I saw you there at the end of your life
Blood surrounding you from that damn knife
I fell to the ground and found your letter.
Which said don t worry my life will be better
You wanted your life to come to an end
You believed you had no one not one friend
You said you were a mistake you had to die
On the bottom of the letter a tear from your cries
So good bye mum was what it said
But guess what bullies im now the one dead
I killed myself after I wrote this note
The pain the anguish I could not cope
So son look for me in heaven I will be there
The after life will be different, our love we will share
Bye bye cruel world I hope you know
Bullying and harassment is not the way to go
Stop the torment and hear there pain
We don t want know more deaths
Our world is to blame…..
Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- High School by Gvn.
300 points, ended September 9, 2006, 7 entries
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this is so sad but the true reality of kids who could not live with society
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this was a great write...full of tradgedy and sorrow...it brougtht ears to my eyes
my fave line was
'On the bottom of the letter a tear from your cries'
i caould just picture it and it tugged at my heartstrings
this was a truly emtional piece that gave a clear and well needed message
well done and good lucki n my contest -
"I could see the weakness in his blue eyes"
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This poem was so tragic.. but quite touching. Thank you for your entry in my contest.
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That poor boy! I feel no pity for the scum that causes these deaths. Your life sucks? Everyone has their own problems. Guess what? They find some way to deal with it without causing suicides! It must be magic, you moronic sad-excuse-for-a-soul!!
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i think you need to grow up iam not a moronic sad excuse for a soul the poem was written for a friend who could not cope with life so until you have been there dont judge me or the way i write
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I actually LIKED your poem, and would have appluaded, but I couldn't for this contest....
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I think you need to grow up!
Seriously, I wasn't insulting YOU, I was talking to myself/ rambling that people take out their shit on other people. Sorry for the misunderstanding, but maybe you should read something twice before going off at someone....
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Something needs to be done about School bullying!! This poem was so sad but yet so true of society today. I could feel your pain throughout. I am in awe
Excellent write, keep up the wonderful writing
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this is so true and a great write.....
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wow this is really sad...and a tough issue to deal with.
School bullying is a big thing....it is happening everyday but nobody is doing anything about it....
Thank you for entering
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Such a sad topic to write about, but how true. So much bullying going on in the schools these days - sentiments well expressed in these lines - a few typos, that if corrected will make this an excellent poem -remember contractions (can't, didn't) their pain in third last line. Congrats on award as well. See this in schools as I sub all the time - a real pecking order with the same ones at the bottom all the time. Some cope by acting the clown, but many are really hurt and are then even made more fun of.
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You outlined bullying very well .. it can have a really traumatic effect on people.. and the reasons you gave for why bullies bully people is very true. This is a great aspect on the contest, so good luck and keep writing
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... i dont know what to say. beatiful, but that sound wrong, tradgic maybe? You have brought me to tears. you're right, our world is to blame.
heartfelt sympathies.
rah
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